JOURNAL#11

After taking the eight weeks of composition, I had found out that the basic ideas of writing a paragraph. At first, I was a little bit confused about the concepts from the text book because I ha never learned the composition in this way. By these following weeks, I got to know what element should a parapragh possess which may include the sapce order and enough details to describe the subject. However, I think my grammer is still not stroung enough and sometimes I will still confuse about the tense. Moreover, I can't come up with any idea to support my paragraph in the topic that I am not interested in or the field I am not familiar with. So, I should try to work on this part.